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Re: Terra-Flemme Belle: The Heartsworn Prostitute
In the center of the broken-heart city A radiant woman of the night comes to be. Out of the mist of the complex "red light" District there comes a femme ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: funny made up headlines
( this a crazy group of headlines I have either found or made up these) 1.Scientist have discovered that monkeys that have been stabbed have a dramatically shorter life span ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Africa
I gotta say thank you for creating this beautiful work.... you actually beat me to the punch... man...I really am happy to see that someone other than me would address ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Any anime fans?
Ilove anime and manga but I'm not all hardcore about it and niether am I close minded due to it... I like Gurren Lagann, D.gray Man, Twelve Kingdoms, The Boondocks(yes ...
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: Whistling the same ugly tune.
hmm if I wasn't persuaded otherwise, I'd be convinced you were ripping off my concepts :) no offense, but except for a few stanzas like my friend Krupp said, this ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: New plans, thoughts, notes, etc.
whoa!! despite you current blockage woes, I think you've come quite far. You've managed to get organized, you've gotten a good right foot in a few of your works you're ...
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: Prologue to Omni-Fate
will somebody please comment!! i worked hard this and it's been copyrighted...speak to me!!!
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: A Name For a Character
ezaria-ezra melinda-melvin allia-allen ariel-aaron
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Prologue to Omni-Fate
( all of the years I've spent working on this book have been nothing but plot development and organization of the volumes. I really want you to critique the story ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: How many/much is too much?
well to aswer the overall question, guess the maximum number of parallel plots in a book would be about 6-7 :? ,I'm mean that's just common sense. unless the 6-7 ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Un-real
it's simple and sweet! cool... if you feel it lacks power, change some of the words or tweek the scenario but don't try to stretch it out. a long poem ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: hope amid blinding despair
I feel you you on this one, but this is too easy. when you want to throw a deep seated pain out here the best way to do it is ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Unbroken Ice
you are the sky, but I am no more than a jumping fish. I am caught in a frozen river seperated from you by an unbreakable sheet of translucent ice ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Ode to a Porch Swing
(yo homey you accidentally put an n on the end of the the on the final line) this is a great poem, the emotional climate is fitting to the situation, ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: The lines pretty much speak for themselves
hmm...the poem speaks of your yearning... I don't really feel the stress in the words...that's the problem with most of the writers on this website, they don't want to engage ...
Feb 2, 2009
